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relic
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Okay. There are people around the board, who want to go into the slash roleplays, but say they are not that good at them. So. This board is going to help you build up your slashiness posts and indepthness in your gay charries.

Note: I'd appreciate help in teaching these youngins' if anyone experianced out there waddles to this board to help me out. ^^;

Now. Pay attention! (Lia. -cackles and hugs- Ahhh don't worry I lurv you.)

We will start off in Lessons...


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"Alright you 'lil prick, either you stay still and let me lick that delicious dessert off you, or I'll pop a cap in your ass so hard, you'll kiss the moon." - Wesley

   
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Lesson 1

I personally would start off with finding if your character is either, uke, or seme. What is seme, and uke you ask? Well I will explain it to you.

Uke-
(oo-kay) (receiver) The partner who receives the technique.

Seme-
(se-may) (attacker) The partner who throws the technique

Although, these terms may not be as helpful since they are in Martial Arts defenitions. So, let's put them in Shounen-Ai terms.

Shounen-Ai Terms

Uke
-In terms of positions in bed, it means "the one below".
-The aphrodisiac side of the couple.
-The one being chased after.
-The one being proposed to.
-The one being seduced.

Seme
-In terms of positions in bed, it means "the one on top".
-The aggressive one in the couple (usually the horny one).
-The one who does the chasing.
-The one who proposes.
-The one who seduces.

So, either your character is a little whore, or a horny bastard. Haha, kidding. So, it's usually almost always easier working your posts in slash rps, when you find out if your character is seme, or uke. If you cannot decide, then. Well. I guess your characters either or. And in which case, I cannot help you improve.





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"Alright you 'lil prick, either you stay still and let me lick that delicious dessert off you, or I'll pop a cap in your ass so hard, you'll kiss the moon." - Wesley

   
fallenangel89
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I think, almost sure, that Zander is uke,
"You know, if I had a penny for every time I pissed off D'Ambrosio just for fun, I would be rich."

~~~

Itís a silent murder/Itís a grave that sings your song/Itís a quiet failure/Itís the one that makes you strong/We are heading down a long empty road/We pass lost souls blinded by the cold/Watch the fire burn out/Watch the curtains slowly close/Waiting on the final words your heart already knows/We are heading down a long empty road/We pass lost souls blinded by the cold/By the cold/Itís a silent murder/Itís a grave that sings your song
   
relic
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Alright. Otis's character is defined personally. But... when he's drunk. He's seme. He's raped so... many... guys... x.x;
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"Alright you 'lil prick, either you stay still and let me lick that delicious dessert off you, or I'll pop a cap in your ass so hard, you'll kiss the moon." - Wesley

   
Zansatsu
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 Posted 12-22-04 09:17 PM   IP           Reply with quote Edit Post Delete post
*laughs* This is a most excellent idea, Kara. Good job.
In the end...we all must die.

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relic
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 Posted 12-22-04 09:22 PM   IP           Reply with quote Edit Post Delete post
-spins- Thank you. ^^ Lesson 2 will come up shortly after I think of it XD
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fallenangel89
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I think maybe Zander should get Otis drunk..... what do you think?
"You know, if I had a penny for every time I pissed off D'Ambrosio just for fun, I would be rich."

~~~

Itís a silent murder/Itís a grave that sings your song/Itís a quiet failure/Itís the one that makes you strong/We are heading down a long empty road/We pass lost souls blinded by the cold/Watch the fire burn out/Watch the curtains slowly close/Waiting on the final words your heart already knows/We are heading down a long empty road/We pass lost souls blinded by the cold/By the cold/Itís a silent murder/Itís a grave that sings your song
   
Byte
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 Posted 12-23-04 05:32 PM   IP           Reply with quote Edit Post Delete post
Yay for Kara! That's good so far...But I don't know what lesson two sound be.

I only have slash roleplays on this site, since Riley isn't replying to the other one...But then again, FallenAngel isn't replying to our's either XDDD

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TennTenshie
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How about teaching them how to drop hints.
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fallenangel89
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O.O I reply, I just suck. That's why I posted here.
"You know, if I had a penny for every time I pissed off D'Ambrosio just for fun, I would be rich."

~~~

Itís a silent murder/Itís a grave that sings your song/Itís a quiet failure/Itís the one that makes you strong/We are heading down a long empty road/We pass lost souls blinded by the cold/Watch the fire burn out/Watch the curtains slowly close/Waiting on the final words your heart already knows/We are heading down a long empty road/We pass lost souls blinded by the cold/By the cold/Itís a silent murder/Itís a grave that sings your song
   
Byte
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Lmao!! You don't suck!
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fallenangel89
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At the how to use the character in that situation, yeah. My virgin mind.
"You know, if I had a penny for every time I pissed off D'Ambrosio just for fun, I would be rich."

~~~

Itís a silent murder/Itís a grave that sings your song/Itís a quiet failure/Itís the one that makes you strong/We are heading down a long empty road/We pass lost souls blinded by the cold/Watch the fire burn out/Watch the curtains slowly close/Waiting on the final words your heart already knows/We are heading down a long empty road/We pass lost souls blinded by the cold/By the cold/Itís a silent murder/Itís a grave that sings your song
   
relic
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 Posted 12-23-04 06:23 PM   IP           Reply with quote Edit Post Delete post
Dropping hints... Hm. O.O Okay. That shall be Lesson two then. Okay, it's coming up now then.
Freakshow Failure


"Alright you 'lil prick, either you stay still and let me lick that delicious dessert off you, or I'll pop a cap in your ass so hard, you'll kiss the moon." - Wesley

   
relic
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Lesson 2

Now that you have mastered Lesson 1, it's time to move onto Lesson 2.

Lesson 2 is all about working with the hints. If your character is uke, you might want to have them start off with flirting. If your character is seme, you might want to let them say something a little seductive or something of the sort.

There are a bunch of different ways to drop hints to get the slash rp a little more intense. The following are ways you might want to start off into a slashy rp.

For Uke Characters
-Flirt
-Play the innocent bitch role (Or whichever personality your character has)
-Show off (And i'm not talking in the show off way for like when you show off your new bike. -wink wink- The -other- Show off
-Kisses (This is either or. Both ways work for both uke and seme)

For Seme Characters
-Be seductive
-Be a little forceful, but not major rough housing
-Work your characters role partner up in affection
-Kisses (This is either or. Both ways work for both uke and seme)

These are just some minor things you can do. Of course, your characters can start off with something as simple as a tickle fight to a make-out session in a matter of seconds. (Using our RP as an example Tenn. And I don't if it will actually turn into something like that but if it doesn't soon, I don't think I'll be able to hold back anymore, and Abrem better watch out. o.O;;

Freakshow Failure


"Alright you 'lil prick, either you stay still and let me lick that delicious dessert off you, or I'll pop a cap in your ass so hard, you'll kiss the moon." - Wesley

   
TennTenshie
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::laughs:: Abrem likes to tickle...

and he'll be watching O.O;;

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relic
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 Posted 12-23-04 07:23 PM   IP           Reply with quote Edit Post Delete post
Hehehe -grins evilly-
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now...hmmm what next...:onders::

Maybe..... hmmmm....

In the heat of the moment..?

Like....what to say...and...stuff

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Zansatsu
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*is learning something actually.* *laughs*
In the end...we all must die.

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relic
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-taps finger against comp desk- Hmm.. Ahhh.. Yes. Reactions, and actions. ^^ Perfect your a big help.

Yay, people are actually learning! -clings to Zansa-

Okay, Lesson 3 coming up now.

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"Alright you 'lil prick, either you stay still and let me lick that delicious dessert off you, or I'll pop a cap in your ass so hard, you'll kiss the moon." - Wesley

   
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I think we've done soemthign very dangerous by letting her loose with that one.
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fallenangel89
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I'm leanring something too..... that I absolutely suck at slash rps *goes to sulk in a corner*
"You know, if I had a penny for every time I pissed off D'Ambrosio just for fun, I would be rich."

~~~

Itís a silent murder/Itís a grave that sings your song/Itís a quiet failure/Itís the one that makes you strong/We are heading down a long empty road/We pass lost souls blinded by the cold/Watch the fire burn out/Watch the curtains slowly close/Waiting on the final words your heart already knows/We are heading down a long empty road/We pass lost souls blinded by the cold/By the cold/Itís a silent murder/Itís a grave that sings your song
   
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::blinks:: only way to get better is to do them..
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relic
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Lesson 3

It's onto Lesson 3 now. Lesson 1 and 2, we're basically explaining things, now it's time to work on Reactions and Actions that a character responds to and or does while in the heat of the moment.

The following will be put under Uke and Seme topics once more to have an easier follow through.

For Uke Characters

For some people, replying to seme posts is a little harder then with coming up with a seme post itself. You may have a writers block at times as you try to think of what your characters reaction will be to it. I know I've had some difficulty at some times, so this may help all you wandering souls.

-Start off with a noise (If your character's role partner is doing an intimate action, verbal sounds can be used to respond to what they're doing.
For example: "A moan came past his parted lips at the others sensitive touches to his body. He drew in a breath eyes staring past his shoulder to the ceiling.")
-Use an action to verse their action (When your character is having an action done to them, you may want to do something gently back, like, a caress of the fingers.
For example: "His hands moved to slide around the others waist, pulling him closer to his chest. His fingers slid underneath his shirt, nails lightly grazing the skin of his back.")
-Use an action of you own character (Along with responding to another character, you can use an action on your own character like, a tilt of the head or shutting his or her eyes.
For example: "He crained his neck slightly, turning his head to the side as the other kissed his neck. His eyes slowly shut as he leaned back further onto the floor from the others weight upon him.")
-Express feelings in thoughts (Along with verbally and actions to express your characters intimate moment, you may want to say what your character is thinking.
For example: "He hadn't really thought he'd end up spending the night here. Let alone spend it on the ground, underneath the other.")

Now, put it all together and see what you got.

A moan came past his parted lips at the others sensitive touches to his body. He drew in a breath eyes staring past his shoulder to the ceiling. His hands moved to slide around the others waist, pulling him closer to his chest. His fingers slid underneath his shirt, nails lightly grazing the skin of his back. He crained his neck slightly, turning his head to the side as the other kissed his neck. His eyes slowly shut as he leaned back further onto the floor from the others weight upon him. He hadn't really thought he'd end up spending the night here. Let alone spend it on the ground, underneath the other.

Now look at that. Not a bad post, eh? A perfect paragraph describing an uke characters reaction. And it's not a one liner post. I really should read over these lessons more and use them for myself. Even though I'm the one explaining them. Heh. So there you go. Some few reactions you can follow off by.

For Seme Characters

Seme characters a waaay easier then uke characters. At least in my opinion. When you have a seme character, keep in mind, your the dominant one. And you can do whatever the fuck you please. There really aren't reactions in a seme character. More 'actions' then anything. So here's some things your seme character can do.

-Use a noise (Verbal noises aren't just for uke characters either you know!
For example: "He purred softly in his ear, making soft pleasent noises as he moved to lay over top of him."
-Make a move (This is probably going to be a big chunk out of your post. Either you can use some small techniques if you don't have much of an imagination, or you can really over-do it and get good feed-back. -cackle-
For example: "He bent his head lower to his chest and ran his tongue up along the center line of his body. He mouth his mouth over to one of his nipples, and gently nibbled on it, while he moved his hands to the others lower half. His hands slipped underneath the others pants and moved down to his privates where his fingers caressed them gently.")

That's about as much as you can do, but you can also had your characters own movements in along with some thoughts.
For Example: "He licked his lips, lifting his head up slightly to look at the other to smile a moment before purring and bending down to kiss him again. God this boy tasted yummy."

In that post I added a little bit of everything. Thoughts, self action, action, and verbal. Now, put it all together and you've come up with something like this.

He purred softly in his ear, making soft pleasent noises as he moved to lay over top of him. He bent his head lower to his chest and ran his tongue up along the center line of his body. He mouth his mouth over to one of his nipples, and gently nibbled on it, while he moved his hands to the others lower half. His hands slipped underneath the others pants and moved down to his privates where his fingers caressed them gently. He licked his lips, lifting his head up slightly to look at the other to smile a moment before purring and bending down to kiss him again. God this boy tasted yummy.

And there you go. Your seme post. Of course, you can add a little more description then I did. Hell, you can do whatever you want with your posts, but these are just some tips on what you can post in...

Dun dun dunnnnn

The heat of the moment!

Freakshow Failure


"Alright you 'lil prick, either you stay still and let me lick that delicious dessert off you, or I'll pop a cap in your ass so hard, you'll kiss the moon." - Wesley

   
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I think we've done soemthign very dangerous by letting her loose with that one.


Yes. You have done something VERY dangerous. -points- Look at how fucking long Lesson 3 is. -dies- I over do it too much.

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"Alright you 'lil prick, either you stay still and let me lick that delicious dessert off you, or I'll pop a cap in your ass so hard, you'll kiss the moon." - Wesley

   
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No you don't. There is no such thing as being overly helpful in Slashiness. *laughs* *gives Kara a dozen red roses* *hugs*
In the end...we all must die.

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::wont say anythign else::
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relic
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-is cackling for some odd reason- Lesson 4. -becoming more sadistic by the minute-
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"Alright you 'lil prick, either you stay still and let me lick that delicious dessert off you, or I'll pop a cap in your ass so hard, you'll kiss the moon." - Wesley

   
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oh dear.
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Eeeeehehehehe Lesson 4. -mad grin-
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*falls over laughing in delight.
In the end...we all must die.

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